05-11-2007, 11:56 AM
This has been claimed b Bob196045
This is the diary of Searor Doron, Altmer [High Elf] Alchemist, this was originall started by Shadowcore. What you have to do is write a diary of the events within Dumac City as though someone was traveling through it.
Here is what has been doen so far, and a few suggestions for Bob196045.
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Diary of Searor Doron, Altmer archeologist
Entry 1
I start this diary to write down my progess in to the Dwemer ruins of
Dumac. Today I and 9 other men have finally found the entrance to Dumac,
We will search the ruins and find everything thats of worth for us and take
it with us!
Entry 2
We are now deep in the ruins, constantly we hear the rumbling of the old machineries.
We also have found some old skeletons of other explorers who died here,
but no real treasure so far, except for an old map pointing out to some room called
the synthesizing room, I wonder whats in their??
Entry 3
We have found the synthesizing room!!!!!! Its full of machineries and other things.
There is one very big machine which needs some codes to be activated,
we will search for them and see if we can activate it.
Entry 4
The machine attacked us!!!!!!!!!!! After we put codes in it, it came alive and attacked us
4 of us were killed, after that Poskor died, who was our most talented warrior, we ran.
Obviously we have put in the wrong codes and now its after us! What must I do??!
Entry 5
The machine is still after us, we can hear its footsteps while we are in
the deep caverns of the ruins. Some of the other explorers are getting insane,
Maskonrir is getting worser and worser. He says that he wants to die!!!!
Entry 6
Maskonrir is dead, he was insane he attacked his healer and wounded him with his sword.
I saw it and drew my sword into his chest while he was begging for his dead.
His healer, Grash-mor-gonak wound is deep and I'm not sure if he will live the day.
Entry 7
Only 3 of us are left, Grash-mor-gonak died of his injury.
And Ismador died while battling a defender of the ruins.
We know that the machine is getting closer, making us even more insane.
Entry 8
I can hear it close by!!!!!!! It is almost here it will kill us but not without a fight!!!
I, Klosnot and Rorkan are getting ready, but insanity sometimes takes over our mind.
I can sometimes hear myself scream for dead and beg for mercy and the same time!!
Entry 9
The fight came quicker as expected, by suprise the machine rushed in and killed Klosnot
with one trust. In some second i was badly wounded and I could hear that Rorkan
had become complety insane!! But i won't...... (the rest of text is covered with
bloodstaines and has become unreadable)
Entry 10
I hastily write this last entry in crouched away of the machine but he is coming!!
If anyone find this dairy please bring to my wife and children on Summerset Isle,
say that Searor loved them and they must never forget the great thing e have done together..
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Fixing Suggestions - from Bob196045
Your writer Searor Doron is Altmer
Altmer tend to use their Sir name and the ancestiral home as the name they go by, in this case a possibility would be Doron of Sunhold
also the Altmer feel and make a point of letting you know they are better than you, more educated, more sophisticatic, more intellectual
So their writings would most likely display that "snobbish" appearence
Entry 1
I start this diary to write down my progess in to the Dwemer ruins of
Dumac. Today I and 9 other men have finally found the entrance to Dumac, We will search the ruins and find everything thats of worth for us and take
it with us!
Might read:
Entry 1
This diary(journal) is being written to document the study of the Dwemer Ruin known as Dumac. My party consists of 9 other men of various trade. We will study the ruin, document our findings, and recover, for our own purpose, any treasures from within. Today we have finally found the enterence and are about to venture in.
This is the diary of Searor Doron, Altmer [High Elf] Alchemist, this was originall started by Shadowcore. What you have to do is write a diary of the events within Dumac City as though someone was traveling through it.
Here is what has been doen so far, and a few suggestions for Bob196045.
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Diary of Searor Doron, Altmer archeologist
Entry 1
I start this diary to write down my progess in to the Dwemer ruins of
Dumac. Today I and 9 other men have finally found the entrance to Dumac,
We will search the ruins and find everything thats of worth for us and take
it with us!
Entry 2
We are now deep in the ruins, constantly we hear the rumbling of the old machineries.
We also have found some old skeletons of other explorers who died here,
but no real treasure so far, except for an old map pointing out to some room called
the synthesizing room, I wonder whats in their??
Entry 3
We have found the synthesizing room!!!!!! Its full of machineries and other things.
There is one very big machine which needs some codes to be activated,
we will search for them and see if we can activate it.
Entry 4
The machine attacked us!!!!!!!!!!! After we put codes in it, it came alive and attacked us
4 of us were killed, after that Poskor died, who was our most talented warrior, we ran.
Obviously we have put in the wrong codes and now its after us! What must I do??!
Entry 5
The machine is still after us, we can hear its footsteps while we are in
the deep caverns of the ruins. Some of the other explorers are getting insane,
Maskonrir is getting worser and worser. He says that he wants to die!!!!
Entry 6
Maskonrir is dead, he was insane he attacked his healer and wounded him with his sword.
I saw it and drew my sword into his chest while he was begging for his dead.
His healer, Grash-mor-gonak wound is deep and I'm not sure if he will live the day.
Entry 7
Only 3 of us are left, Grash-mor-gonak died of his injury.
And Ismador died while battling a defender of the ruins.
We know that the machine is getting closer, making us even more insane.
Entry 8
I can hear it close by!!!!!!! It is almost here it will kill us but not without a fight!!!
I, Klosnot and Rorkan are getting ready, but insanity sometimes takes over our mind.
I can sometimes hear myself scream for dead and beg for mercy and the same time!!
Entry 9
The fight came quicker as expected, by suprise the machine rushed in and killed Klosnot
with one trust. In some second i was badly wounded and I could hear that Rorkan
had become complety insane!! But i won't...... (the rest of text is covered with
bloodstaines and has become unreadable)
Entry 10
I hastily write this last entry in crouched away of the machine but he is coming!!
If anyone find this dairy please bring to my wife and children on Summerset Isle,
say that Searor loved them and they must never forget the great thing e have done together..
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Fixing Suggestions - from Bob196045
Your writer Searor Doron is Altmer
Altmer tend to use their Sir name and the ancestiral home as the name they go by, in this case a possibility would be Doron of Sunhold
also the Altmer feel and make a point of letting you know they are better than you, more educated, more sophisticatic, more intellectual
So their writings would most likely display that "snobbish" appearence
Entry 1
I start this diary to write down my progess in to the Dwemer ruins of
Dumac. Today I and 9 other men have finally found the entrance to Dumac, We will search the ruins and find everything thats of worth for us and take
it with us!
Might read:
Entry 1
This diary(journal) is being written to document the study of the Dwemer Ruin known as Dumac. My party consists of 9 other men of various trade. We will study the ruin, document our findings, and recover, for our own purpose, any treasures from within. Today we have finally found the enterence and are about to venture in.