Braggi
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Registration Date: 2006.09.23
Posts: 287
Location: B.C. Canada
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I looked this over and, as with Volume II of the series I like the
content very much. I'm going to put on my impromptu editor's hat and
list some (very) minor details I corrected. These were all either
spelling or structure errors, as follows:
- In the title you labeled the book as "Volume II" instead of Volume III.
- Two Lore-based spelling mistakes - "Illiac" as "Iliac" and "Wrothgarian" as "Rothgarian".
That was it!
Once again, excellent work and very quickly done too. With your
permission, I would like to get all three volumes of the series into
the CS and then post the resulting ESP file here for you to archive for
yourself. The more copies we have shared of finished works, the easier
it will be to make certain that everything is inplace when we start
adding items to the master ESM file for High Rock.
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The Cartography of Politics III - Primogeniture
