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blade-knight
Journeyman
Registration Date: 11.09.2006
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Another attempt at making a lore friendly quest.
Part 1 A Contract with Death
You start the quest at *dont know where at the time*. A man and woman
named Hugo Varon and Veronica Frost runs up to you and tells you to
follow him or get mugged. They'll lead you into the Church. Hugo tell
you to wait until midnight there. When you do he'll see you and tell
you to follow him once more. He'll open up a secret passageway to
secret crypts. There you'll find a man who is uing the cloack spell (
through out the quest he'll be that way until the end). He goes by the
name of Sayed. He tells you he has trouble with vampires and needs you
to go to an ice cavern known as Iceast. He then tells you a little
riddle about his life. He rambles about "Being seen as the ugliest kid
in class I deserted the town and fled to the woods". He then sends you
off. The cavern is located east off the village. When you enter it's
covered in ice and you see corpses and tombs of ice. Sayed tells you to
go to the middle of the cavern. There you find a large block of ice.
You hear a voice saying "Help me.". You pull a switch which activates
fire and melts the block. There a vampire (who's a little bigger than
you) named Xavier. He thanks you and tells you that he is the leader of
the vampires known as Volkihar. He tells you that you must only go if
you join them. You have two choices.
A) You say no (activitates different questline). He feels pity and
begins to attack because he tells you that you've chosen wrong. Then
you see Hugo and Veronica come and helps you fight Xavier. Xavier also
summons other vampires. After that he sends them (in a cinemtaic) where
the vampires thaw and escape the cavern to invade the city.
B) You join them and he tells you to kill Sayed. Then Hugo and Veronica
arrive in disgust and Veronica tells you that she can't belive what is
happening and commits suicide because she loves you ( ifyou follow A
you'd learn how she got to know you).
I'll only continue when I hear what you guys think (my style).
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15.09.2006 03:48 |
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No one may love the PC.
Also joining the Vamps is a bad idea, and we already have three vampire clans in Skyrim, no need for anymore.
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15.09.2006 06:01 |
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Psychotic
Jarl of Skyrim
Registration Date: 30.07.2006
Posts: 3,420
Location: Sheogorath's Realm
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I like the idea, but it has a few holes in it. The love-suicide thing
is a bit too much. Also the vampire should try and convince you about
how he's been unjustly tricked and trapped by the hunters; it would
make joining him more justifiable. Some of the names could use a bit of
work, but I like the name of the vamp clan.
Also you should have the choice not to go with Hugo and Veronica when
they first approach you and that should end the quest right there by
either just leaving of fighting them.
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15.09.2006 11:04 |
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Crotch Pope
Swordsman
Registration Date: 28.09.2006
Posts: 15
Location: Wisconsin... the lost province of Tamriel
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I do enjoy the general premise of the quest, however, the only thing I
would change is "Veronica Frost". That name... it just doesn't seem to
fit to me. Maybe it does to you, or everyone else for that matter, but
it bothers me. That just doesn't seem like a kind of name that would be
in the game.
I could have a new name for you but I don't know what race she is, therefore I can't make an appropriate name.
That's just my opinion.
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29.09.2006 17:43 |
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Arbiter
Archduke
Registration Date: 24.10.2005
Posts: 1,918
Location: Croatia the Nether-Bringer
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Originally posted by Crotch Pope
I do enjoy the general premise of the quest, however, the only thing I
would change is "Veronica Frost". That name... it just doesn't seem to
fit to me. Maybe it does to you, or everyone else for that matter, but
it bothers me. That just doesn't seem like a kind of name that would be
in the game.
I could have a new name for you but I don't know what race she is, therefore I can't make an appropriate name.
That's just my opinion. |
Well, Silgrad Tower DOES have it's own name generator, so that's not really a problem. 
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29.09.2006 17:47 |
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Psychotic
Jarl of Skyrim
Registration Date: 30.07.2006
Posts: 3,420
Location: Sheogorath's Realm
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I think the names are temporary.
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29.09.2006 17:52 |
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