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Ja-Kha'jay
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Here is a Nord Fairy tale I've been working with. No quests involved, just a normal bookshop one. What do you guys think?

:) The Wolf and the Bear

One day a wolf and the bear were walking through the forest.

?I am the strongest and most cunning animal in the world.? Said the bear, for he was very prideful.

?No, none is stronger or more cunning than man.? Said the wolf, for he had met such creatures.

?Show me a man, and we shall see.? The bear said, eager to prove himself.

The wolf led the bear to a mountain pass and watched as an old soldier walked past, back hunched in old age.

?Is that a man?? The bear asked.

?That was a man.? The wolf said, and they waited some more.

Before long, a child came along the road, trailing a wooden duck.

?Is that a man?? The bear asked.

?That will be a man.? The wolf answered, and they patiently waited some more.

Soon a hunter came along the road, bow in hand, and daggers at his belt.

?Is that a man?? The bear asked.

?That is a man.? The wolf agreed.

The bear charged down the mountain side, and the hunter spotted him. The hunter raised his bow and shot at the bear. The bear felt the arrow hit his shoulder but he kept on charging down the mountain. The hunter notched another arrow and fired again. The bear felt the arrow slam into his other shoulder, but he kept going. The hunter could not get another arrow before the bear was upon him. He pulled out his daggers and cut the bear across his nose. The bear felt the pain and retreated to where the wolf waited.

The wolf grinned as he watched his friend climb up the hill after the encounter with the hunter.

?You where right, Wolf. Man surely is the strongest and most cunning of creatures. As I drew close he raised a stick and used it to fire two other sticks at me. And when I was upon him he unsheathed his claws and scratched me upon my nose.? The Bear admitted his defeat.

?This, my friend is why we do not make friends with man. For man has no desire to be our friend, always attacking us on sight. Come let us leave this place.? The wolf led the bear back into the forest.
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Hey, cool story :D Fairy tales definitely add more flavor to the game world. Interesting though how Nords only have a base intel of 30...
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The hunter nocked another arrow and fired again.

shouldn't it be "notched another arrow".
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Pretty cool idea, very original Good job!
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Hey, cool story :D Fairy tales definitely add more flavor to the game world. Interesting though how Nords only have a base intel of 30...
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The hunter nocked another arrow and fired again.

shouldn't it be "notched another arrow".


Yes. It should. Must have forgotten to hit spell checker. :)

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Very nice, and I formatted the book name for you.
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Love the story :D attack on sight.... rofl

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rewrite the end it's lame


a better word is inconsistent. It's all asope fable then it becomes an action sequence. do one or the others, don't combine it unless you make it distinct. they really don't go good together, that's all

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