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cruxvader
Seigneur
Registration Date: 17.05.2006
Posts: 155
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I was a young lass when I first met him. He walked to me after the
village gathering... The wind blew cold and hard that day. I was trying
to keep my skirt from fleeing, and as I put both of my hands to do so,
so he arrived. So brilliant, so handsome, he spoke with a new word. It
was directed at my heart.
As time went on, we exchanged words, and eventually vows. My father had
decided to go north, and I would study the languages of the land in the
imperial university. But as tongues of neighbors had come and gone, my
heart had stayed south, in our homeland.
Yea, no word passed of him by mine ear. and I speak in pity and
shame... I am to be wed now to no name, no exorbitances, and my heart
to wain. I weep, I weep deeply. I wept alone.
His kinsmen gone in militant rank would send word to me. He had been slain.
This world is cold, it is unforgiving. Do as your heart tells you as it
speaks, maidens and laywomen. Do not wait for other things... For if I
had stayed with him, so my heart would be fleeting. I seek forgiveness
now within the walls of the cathedral.
All this here... Is nothing to what I am now. It has nothing to what it could have been.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by cruxvader: 22.04.2007 03:16.
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15.04.2007 22:15 |
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cruxvader
Seigneur
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Posts: 155
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22.04.2007 03:16 |
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Alasdair
Jarl of Skyrim
Registration Date: 29.08.2006
Posts: 1,169
Location: Somerset, England
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It's very good, but I'm not sure whether it would be best as a book, or part of a quest.
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22.04.2007 13:09 |
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cruxvader
Seigneur
Registration Date: 17.05.2006
Posts: 155
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incorporation shouldn't be a problem
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27.04.2007 22:13 |
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Siegfried
Archduke
Registration Date: 07.03.2006
Posts: 2,598
Location: With Your Mom...
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Hey, I like it, interesting story, and could make for a cool quest.
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28.04.2007 18:25 |
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Ja-Kha'jay
Marquise
Registration Date: 15.08.2006
Posts: 1,053
Location: New Zealand
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It would make for a neat quest, nice job dude
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28.04.2007 23:10 |
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