SHC23A "The Castle Towers" [Finished]

[Sanpicture]

I've looked at your claim and I have a few remarks:

- The towers still look too much the same. The contain mostly the same objects, placed in a different angle. You should make the four towers totally different from eachother. They also contain too much barrels. There are people living in this castle and I think they've got a basement or something to store their barrels. Why would they keep it in their bedroom/livingroom?

- The corridors are more detailed, which is good. But the atmosphere is still very empty. I don't know exactly how to describe this, but it looks like there are no people living there. Place some different clutter like bookshelfs, a broom, maybe a wine rack. Just look under the clutter section in the cs and try things out.

I will give a full review once these things are fixed.

[Trankintor]

the thing is that it is no one living there, everyone is living in the castle that I'm making too. And the castle don't have a basement, so I don't think they have any other place to place it in...

And for the hallways, I think I can fix that by adding some statues.

[sandor]

Originally posted by Sanpicture
I've looked at your claim and I have a few remarks:

- The towers still look too much the same. The contain mostly the same objects, placed in a different angle. You should make the four towers totally different from each other. They also contain too much barrels.

I agree, please change the way you decorated these towers.
You could use one or two towers and create the main amory.

[Trankintor]

Originally posted by sandor
You could use one or two towers and create the main amory.

Thanks, that's a great idea! This armory will be for the legioners, and not the town guard, as they will have there armory in the gate entrace, right?

[sandor]

Originally posted by Trankintor
This armory will be for the legioners, and not the town guard, as they will have there armory in the gate entrace, right?

Yes, that's correct.

[Trankintor]

Ok, here it is, the new one. I hope you like it, I think that I have done about what you asked for.

[sandor]

I'll reply later today or tomorrow.

[Trankintor]

good.

[sandor]

Originally posted by Sanpicture
I've looked at your claim and I have a few remarks:

- The towers still look too much the same. The contain mostly the same objects, placed in a different angle. You should make the four towers totally different from eachother. They also contain too much barrels.

This still applies to your latest esp.
You didn't add a lot of new content.

What I meant with the main armory:
- add shelfs with armor
- add shelfs with weapons
- add more weapon racks.

Change one tower into a food storage with grain sacks, stored ingredients.
Show the food and ingredients (no barrels and chests).

[Trankintor]

Ok, I wasn't sure, so I made some chests instead, but I'll redo that.
And I will do that other thing too.

But the thing is that I have lost some 'exitement' over doing claims right now, and it is only 2 days untill I go to my grandfather, so you will probably not get anything new on my claims for about 2 weeks now.
But when I come home again, I sure hope that the exitement have returned

Don't be worried, I'm sure it will.