Sohei Codex of Honour

[Catlemur]

1.Always obey the commands of Zasu.
2.You should never be seen drunk in a public place.
3.Be ready to give your life for your order.
4.Never leave your position during a battle.
5.Looting the dead members of the order is strictly forbidden.
6.Do not marry outsiders.
7.Do not dishonor your order.
8.Respect the elder.
9.Die but not surrender.
10.Duels between members of the order are not allowed.
11.Kill any traitor you see.
12.Share you knowlege with the young.
13.Obey the everyone with a higher rank than you.

[Ysne]

Originally posted by Catlemur
1.Always obey the commands of Zasu and everyone else who has a higher rank than you.
2.You should never be seen drunk in a public place.
3.Be ready to give your life for your order.
4.Never leave your position during a battle and kill any traitor you see.
5.Looting the dead members of the order is strictly forbidden.
6.Do not marry outsiders.
7.Do not dishonor your order.
8.Respect the elder and help the young.
9.Die but not surrender.
10.Duels between members of the order are not allowed.
If you think it is too small I will try to write some more.

I would recommend separting out no 4 into two separate sentences. It is never a good idea to put two different ideas into one sentence. Number 1 should perhaps be two separate commands as well. If only because it is possible for the commands of Zasu to conflict with lower ranking superiors.

[Catlemur]

edited

[Lady Nerevar]

some parallel structure would really help to make it look like a cohesive document. you should also arrange rules in order of importance: being seen drunk in public is probably not as important as respecting your elders.